Jun 8, 2014

Descriptive Writing

We have been learning to write descriptions. We use a Y chart, picture or outline to plan our writing.

My dad has a bushy black beard and he is a trusty man. He has a lot of white teeth. He likes fly fishing, normal fishing, cooking, playing with me and caring for me. Also he loves getting down and talking to us.
by Max

My dad always wears a black top and blue jeans. So, he always looks the same. My dad has black and a little grey hair but he has the brightest blue eyes you can imagine. My dad likes doing anything for me or my younger brother. I can trust my dad. He is kind and helpful.
by Juno

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